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留學文件修改 英文讀書計畫SoP潤稿 編修潤飾 Proofreading&Editing (Electrical Engineering)

Our client who was applying to MS programs in Electric and Computer Engineering gained admission to NC State University, Arizona State University, Texas A&M University and University of Wisconsin–Madison for spring semester 2016.

Admissions results
已錄取NC State University、 Arizona State University、 Texas A&M University、 University of Wisconsin–Madison等校!!!
Services rendered
Academic Applications Proofreading and Editing Service /留學文件編修
留學文件 (美國)急件編修--推薦信LoR、讀書計畫SoP 寫作諮詢、編修潤飾並提供寫作建議
Major  
申請 2016美國春季碩士班,North Carolina State University (NCSU)、Arizona State University (ASU)、Texas A&M University (TAMU)、 University of Wisconsin–Madison (UW-Madison)等校 Electric Engineering / Electric and Computer Engineering (Signal & Image Processing) 電機工程訊號/影像處理等領域
Feedback  
I think the most important reason that I can get admissions is my SoP, since my GPA, TOEFL, and GRE are not very distinguished. Even for some schools, they don't look at my letters of recommendation (I get admissions before my advisor submit the letter of recommendation).

Hints for good SoP content/英文讀書計畫寫作技巧分享



“在留學諮詢的過程中,我們提供客戶一系列的SoP的寫作技巧與指導。
在寫作方向上,申請人一定要注意:SoP不是自傳、不是個人的回憶錄。
我們甚至見過申請文件是這樣開頭的:「我有個溫暖的家,家裡有爸爸媽媽和弟弟,家人都很支持我繼續深造,假日我們喜歡爬山和攝影、、、」這不但完全偏離主題,也表示申請人對於SoP的文體和功能有認知上錯誤。

此外,申請人對於所申請的學校要有一定了解,尤其是要申請競爭較激烈的碩士學位學程、博士班的學生,如果能在文章中表現出自己對未來的研究領域與該校的師資、教學資源等有相當程度的認識,不但會讓SoP內容更具體,它也傳達了這樣的訊息:「我在申請前做了功課、申請貴系是充分考慮之後做的決定」這是很基本的、也是非常重要的。

#1466 留學文件修改 讀書計畫SoP、個人陳述Personal Statement 編修潤飾 Proofreading&Editing (ECE/EECS)

最新:已錄取University of Michigan-Electrical and Computer Engineering!!!

接案: 2014 Sept. 29
使用方案: 
客戶: W.H. 
工作內容: 留學文件 (美國) CV、讀書計畫SoP、個人陳述Personal Statement 寫作諮詢、編修潤飾並提供專業建議
研究領域: 申請 EECS/ECE/EE at Umich、GaTech等校碩士班學程
feedback: 
" 非常感謝您與Rob的幫忙與鼓勵"
"Dear Rob, 
Personal statement is great! The revised version of it really present my characteristics, life experience and why I want to apply graduate school in engineering. The base draft of my statement of purpose is also favorable since it present more about my purpose of application rather than just describe stuffs from my CV."

特殊要求: 

Statement of Purpose+Personal Statement

Encouraging you all to consider non-traditional destinations for studies abroad

More reflections at the EPFL, a photo by jeremiah.andrick on Flickr.

“在過去,所有的留學目的地之選項中,美國、英國無疑是最受歡迎的兩個國家。不過,近年来,我們發現美國、英國不再是留學生唯一的選擇,留學生選擇到美英以外之國家留學的情況越來越普遍。在我們的客戶當中,歐洲國家尤以德國最受留學生歡迎,主要原因是費用低廉 (甚至免費)、教育體制完善。有些客戶的主要考量是留學經費、開銷、語言能力、有些人則是考慮到獎學金、未來在該地的工作機會或是取得簽證的容易度,這些同學選擇到瑞典、荷蘭、瑞士、澳洲、法國甚至中東國家進修。在以下的文章中,我們希望與讀者們分享我們過往的經驗與並分析出國留學之另類、小眾選項。

#1464 留學文件修改 SoP 讀書計畫、Letter of Motivation 動機信潤稿 編修潤飾 Proofreading&Editing (Information Technology)

最新:已錄取University Esslingen!!!

接案: 2014 Dec
使用方案: 

客戶: Ju
工作內容: 留學文件 (德國、歐洲) CV、Letter of Motivation 動機信寫作諮詢、編修潤飾並提供專業建議
研究領域: 申請 Hochschule Esslingen (University Esslingen)、Universität Stuttgart (University of Stuttgart) 等校,申請Automotive Technology/Automotive Systems/Information Technology/human–machine interaction (HMI)/Computer Interface Technology/Embedded System Engineering 等領域碩士班學程
Feedback: "Your works look fantastic! Words can't tell how grateful I am."

特殊要求: Letter of Motivation