#1212 留學文件 讀書計畫SoP、推薦信 編修潤飾 Proofreading&Editing (Psychology)

已錄取SUNY Plattsburgh (Master in Clinical Mental Health Counseling)

接案: 2012 Nov 14

費時: 5日

客戶: Huan 

工作內容: 留學文件 (美國) 含讀書計畫SoP 及推薦信編修潤飾 Proofreading&Editing 
並提供專業建議

研究領域: Veterinary Science；動物科學；獸醫科學/ Clinical Psychology；臨床心理學
特殊要求: 兩封推薦信須各採用不同語氣、SoP符合各校字數、頁數限制

Feedback：
"我必須老實地說，能在申請之前遇到你們真的是上天的眷顧.."

作者: ************* (******) 看板: translator
標題: [潤稿] 留學文件SOP，推薦信+建議
時間: Thu Nov  8 21:30:03 2012

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[必]工 作 量： SOP-500字，推薦信約300字*2封
[必]工作報酬： *元/字或更高
[必]涉及語言： 英文
[必]所屬領域： 諮商
[必]文件類型： SOP，推薦信
[必]截 稿 日： 希望第一版能在11/12前
[必]應徵期限： 11/15 or 應徵到為止
[必]聯絡方式： 站內信或************@gmail.com
[必]付費方式： 談定後先預付一半，交稿後3天內付清餘額
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[選]工作要求： 希望以留學過，有潤稿經驗者為優先
[選]參考段落：（提供部分段落讓譯者評估難度，若未提供請勿刪除）
[選]試 譯 文：（100-200字，並不超過全文1/10。嚴禁私下試譯。若未提供請勿刪除）
[選]其他事項： 請提供之前的sample以做參考

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T1206 論文編修潤飾 Proofreading & Editing (Medical Technology)

接案: 2012 Oct 19
費時: 4日
客戶/譯案: Ashley 
工作內容: 論文摘要潤飾English proofreading
特殊要求: 相關背景、native speaker
研究領域: 復健醫學

Feedback:

"內容標示得很清楚，謝謝! :)....謝謝Rob老師的修改，很多小細節自己沒有注意到。"

作者: ************* 看板: translator
標題: [潤稿]0.7/字_潤稿_復健醫學論文_2989字_1022
時間: Thu Oct 18 13:20:26 2012


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[必]工 作 量：2989 字
[必]工作報酬：
[必]涉及語言：英文
[必]所屬領域：復健醫學
[必]文件類型：論文
[必]截 稿 日：10/22
[必]應徵期限：希望這兩天徵的到
[必]聯絡方式：站內信
[必]付費方式：請先試潤，確定之後我會在完稿的兩天內付款。

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[選]工作要求：
1. 希望有相關背景的朋友來幫忙
2. 希望能在下禮拜二完稿，不能拖稿
3. 希望是native speaker或是有英文教學等相關經驗(若能提供TOFEL或IELTS分數也可)

[選]參考段落：（提供部分段落讓譯者評估難度，若未提供請勿刪除）
[選]試 譯 文：
After a period of rehabilitation, therapists have to assess patient's status from diverse views such as mental, activities of daily living, motor function, or speech function. For arm movement, the assessment divides into 3 levels: function, activities of daily living (ADL), and participation level. In function level assessment, therapists evaluate the status of motor function, motor strength, and motor spasticity. Fugl-Meyer Test of Arm Function Upper Extremity (FMUE) was developed from the original
stages of motor recovery described by Brunnstrom and it is examined for the presence of synergistic and isolated movement patterns and grasp [41]. The Motor Status Scale (MSS) [42] provided a more complete and discrete measure of upper-limb isolated movement and motor function than is possible with the FMUE, by grading motor abilities on a well-defined 6-point scale. The MSS has been divided into 2 scales: one for shoulder and elbow movements and the second for wrist and finger movements. Motor
Assessment Scale (MAS-Upper Limb Items) [43] is another commonly used tool for measuring motor function recovery. The MAS-Upper Limb Items can subscale into 3 categories: Upper Arm Function, Hand Movements, and Advanced Hand Activities. Each subscale's score ranges from 0 to 6, with a total score of 18 for MAS. The Medical Research Council (MRC) [44] test of motor power measures strength in isolated muscle groups of the involved shoulder and elbow on an scale, ranging from 0 (no muscle contraction) to 5
(normal strength). The Modified Ashworth Scale (MAS) [45] measured muscle spasticity by rating the resistance to passive stretch in 14 different muscle groups of the upper limb.

T1207 論文編修潤飾 Proofreading & Editing (Anatomy & Physiology)

接案: 2012 July 

費時: 2日

客戶/譯案: Ms Yu 

工作內容: 論文潤飾 Proofreading

研究領域: 醫學

Feedback:

"好棒！改得好仔細！"

作者  v*********** (***)                                   看板  translator

標題  [潤稿] 醫學

 時間  Sun Jul 15 23:46:50 2012

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[必]工 作 量：1700 字

[必]工作報酬：1400元

[必]涉及語言：英文潤稿

[必]所屬領域：醫學

[必]文件類型：論文

[必]截 稿 日：禮拜三中午12點

[必]應徵期限：7/16 6 PM 或徵到為止

[必]聯絡方式：09**-***-*** 或是yuyu.*****@gmail.com

[必]付費方式：交稿後當天內付清全額

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[選]工作要求：會以潤稿經驗及試潤決定. #必須準時交稿!!!#

[選]試 潤 文：

                                                                                

According to those previous studies continous infusion of into the

cerebral ventricle in rats causes learning and memory deficits accompanied by

a reduction of choline acetyltransferase activity, dysfunction of cholinergic

and dopaminergic system, the decrease in the nicotine- and KCl-induced

stimulation, furthermore; the impairment in long term potential in the CA1

field of the hippocampus slices [17-20]. Therefore, this animal model of AD is\

 a useful screening tool for AD and investigating the

mechanism of action of the medication.

                                                                                

                                                                                

We ultilized YCTMT (an Chinese ancient decoction) treating induced

AD-like rats by oral route. Our results showed YCTMT can improve

induced learning impairment via increased the expression of ACh and NMDRs,

decreased formation of plagues simutaneously. Besides, could

influence on the expression of ACh and NMDARs. Take together, we infer that

the effects of the effects of increasing expression of  ACh and NMDARs of

YCTMT are related to neutralize the induced toxicity.