留學文件潤稿 讀書計畫SoP修改 編修潤飾 Proofreading&Editing (Computer Science)

Our client who was applying to MS programs in Computer Science gained admission to Carnegie Mellon University, UC San Diego, Columbia, UC Davis and NYU for fall semester 2015. In addition, they earned a scholarship from Carnegie Mellon.

Admissions results

已錄取Carnegie Mellon University (CMU) 含獎學金、UCSD 、Columbia 、UC Davis 、NYU 等校!!!

Services rendered

Academic Applications Proofreading and Editing Service /留學文件編修

Educational Counselling/留學諮詢、面試模擬

留學文件 (美國) CV、讀書計畫SoP 寫作諮詢、編修潤飾並提供專業建議

Major  

申請 MS program in Computer Science at CMU、UCSD (University of California, San Diego)、Cornell University、Columbia University、University of California, Davis (UC Davis) 等校CS 碩士班學程 - Software Engineering/Computational Data Science (MCDS)/Natural language processing (NLP)相關

Feedback  

"The charge is reasonable and thanks a lot for discussion with me. I think most of the editors won't discuss with their clients. They just help other clients to "make up" their SOP. I appreciate that Rob would refuse to edit my CV and SOP at the first time I send my poor organized draft. I spend more time to think about how to elaborate my motivation, and my SOP is not "made up" by someone else. Thank you so much Rob!"

"Hi Rob!

I’ll go to CMU Information Networking Institute this August.

Thank you so much for editing my SOP and CV. I am so happy about this result.

...I’ll recommend your service to my friends if they also need a professional editor."

留學文件修改 Personal Statement 編修潤飾、CV、SoP 英文讀書計畫潤稿 Proofreading&Editing (Interactive Telecommunications)

最新：已錄取NYU-Tisch School of the Arts、Parsons、LSE、USC!!!

客戶評價："申請學校的過程中，Sofi & Rob's Assistance提供我非常多協助。一開始我不太能掌握SOP的寫作方向，是Rob逐步協助我釐清SOP的寫作要領，也協助我潤飾相關稿件，對我的申請有非常大的助益。申請學校的流程非常龐雜瑣碎，非常謝謝Sofi & Rob's Assistance提供的諮詢和潤稿服務，幫助我在繁瑣的流程中抓住核心方向，提昇申請學校的效率。"

接案: 2014 Oct 20

使用方案: 

Academic Applications Proofreading and Editing Service /留學文件編修

Educational Counselling/留學諮詢、面試模擬

Academic Essay Writing/學術寫作指導

客戶: N.Y

工作內容: 使用留學諮詢與留學文件 (美國、英國) SoP、CV 等 編修潤飾並提供專業建議

研究領域: Interactive Telecommunications Program (ITP)/互動電子媒體、Design and Technology、Global Media and Communications等領域，申請 NYU、Parsons、LSE、USC等校碩士學程
特殊要求：

Personal Statement:

#1338 留學文件 - 短文寫作指導 Essay Writing 語言諮詢 Consulting (Marketing)

最新：已錄取NYU及Johns Hopkins University!!!

接案: Nov 6, 2013

使用方案: 

Academic Applications Proofreading and Editing Service /留學文件編修

Academic Essay Writing/學術寫作指導

客戶:  Melody

工作內容: 留學文件 (美國)、短文指導寫作、提供專業建議

研究領域: M.S. in  Marketing/行銷碩士, Mays Business School, Texas A&M University等校

Feedback: "謝謝你們的幫忙！很多文句經過你們的巧手一揮，變得更有力且連結性更強了！"

" i have 2 offers (another one is Johns Hopkins just informed this morning) "

APPLICATION INSTRUCTIONS FOR MS MARKETING

#1445 留學文件 讀書計畫SoP 編修潤飾 Proofreading&Editing (Moving Image Archiving and Preservation)

最新：已錄取NYU (含獎學金)、University of Amsterdam

接案: 2014 Oct 15

使用方案: 

Academic Applications Proofreading and Editing Service /留學文件編修

Academic Essay Writing/學術寫作指導

客戶: S.T

工作內容: 留學文件 (美國、荷蘭) 讀書計畫SoP 寫作諮詢、writing sample 編修潤飾並提供專業建議

研究領域: 申請Tisch (NYU)、Universiteit van Amsterdam - Professional MA in Preservation and Presentation of the Moving Image 等校專業碩士保存和移動圖像學程

Feedback: "Hello Rob,

Again, some good news to share!

I also got admission to University of Amsterdam in the mid of March...Thanks again for all your help along the way..."

"Hello Rob,

Great news!!

I've received NYU's offer of admission, with two scholarships!

...Thank you so much for all your kind help! Will keep you updated!"

特殊要求:  Statement of Purpose

留學申請錄取NYU-Tisch心得： 留學文件修改推薦Sofi & Rob - Personal Statement、CV 潤稿 (Interactive Telecommunications)

最新：已錄取NYU-Tisch School of the Arts!!!

接案: 2014 Oct 20

使用方案: 

Academic Applications Proofreading and Editing Service /留學文件編修

Educational Counselling/留學諮詢、面試模擬

Academic Essay Writing/學術寫作指導

客戶: Jimmy

工作內容: 使用留學諮詢與留學文件 (美國) SoP、CV 等 編修潤飾並提供專業建議

研究領域: Interactive Telecommunications Program (ITP)/互動電子媒體，申請 NYU、RISD等校

Feedback: 
"...I'm really satisfied with the result, both resume and SOP. I feel excited and promising with this one, thanks for ur great help!!!"

"Hi, Rob!

I'm Jimmy! I gotta tell you that I got the offer from NYU-ITP!!

Thanks to your great help!!!!!!!!!!

Have a nice day!!!!!..."

特殊要求：

Personal Statement:

Please use about 1,000 words (4 double-spaced pages) to answer

 a couple of these questions. Please do not cover things we can find

 on your resume. It would be great to also state why you wish to 

come to ITP.

#1403 留學文件 - 短文寫作指導 Essay Writing 語言諮詢 Consulting (Marketing)

已錄取： NYU SCPS-Integrated Marketing!!!

接案: Jan 15, 2014 

使用方案: 

Academic Applications Proofreading and Editing Service /留學文件編修

客戶: Yu

工作內容: 留學文件 (美國) Essay Writing  寫作建議、教學

研究領域:  Master’s Program in Integrated Marketing Communications  

西北大學Medill IMC program /Medill - Northwestern University、NYU等校

特殊要求:  超急件 

Professional Essays 

#1215 讀書計畫SoP 編修潤飾 Proofreading & Editing (HCI)

已錄取
University of Washington
MS Human-Centered Design and Engineering  (2/14 via email)

University of Michigan
MS Information - HCI specialization (2/27 via email)

University of Texas Austin
MS Information Studies - HCI & IA focus (3/4 via email)

Indiana University Bloomington
MS HCI Design with partial funding (3/5 via email)

Georgia Institute of Technology
MS HCI - Digital Media Track (3/16 via email)

New York University
MPS Interactive Telecommunication Program  (3/26 via email)

接案: 2012 Nov 18

費時: 4日

客戶: Mr Ku 

工作內容: 留學文件 、讀書計畫SoP 撰寫 Proofreading & Editing並提供專業意見

特殊要求: 

"University of Texas at Austin 的 SOP，麻煩你們幫我潤飾。

基本上 UTA 並沒有任何格式及內容限制，但我希望內容在兩頁內，900 - 1000 字上下。也附上他們的 admission 頁面 http://www.ischool.utexas.edu/admissions/masters.php" 

Feedback:

"Thanks a lot for all the comment and help from you guys =] ! "

#1206 留學文件修改 Personal Statement潤稿 讀書計畫、個人陳述 編修潤飾 Proofreading (HCI)

錄取學校與心得分享：

"Hi Rob, 

Here are the admissions that I've got：

University of Washington 
MS Human-Centered Design and Engineering 

University of Michigan, Ann Arbor 
MS Information - HCI specialization

University of Texas Austin
MS Information Studies - HCI & IA focus

Indiana University Bloomington 
MS HCI Design

Georgia Institute of Technology 
MS HCI - Digital Media Track

New York University 
MPS Interactive Telecommunication Program

So basically all of the SOPs were either edited by you and Sofi or based on your revision. I think your service is already excellent, and you guys give me a lot of encouragement to pursue for the best. Still very thankful for both of you guys goading me to do the portfolio for  NYU- ITP. I don't think I'll get the admission without those materials. I'm recently writing an experience-sharing article for the studyabroad forum on PTT. I will definitely promote your service!"

接案: 2012 Oct

費時: 5日

客戶: 郭先生

工作內容: Personal Statement (自傳、個人陳述) 潤飾及提供留學文件專業建議

限定字數1,000字

所屬領域: Interactive Arts; Graphic Storytelling; Digital Storytelling; Interaction Design; Human-Computer Interaction (HCI)

Feedback:

"I just finished reading the revised version and it is excellent!............It is a pleasant cooperation with you guys. Advice from both of you is really valuable. So, I really need to "bother" you guys for a little bit longer ~! Thanks!"