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Our client who was applying to MS
programs in Computer Science gained admission to Carnegie Mellon University, UC San
Diego, Columbia, UC Davis and NYU for fall semester 2015. In addition, they earned a scholarship
from Carnegie Mellon.
Admissions
results
已錄取Carnegie Mellon University (CMU) 含獎學金、UCSD 、Columbia 、UC
Davis 、NYU 等校!!!
Services
rendered
Academic Applications Proofreading and
Editing Service /留學文件編修
Educational Counselling/留學諮詢、面試模擬
留學文件 (美國) CV、讀書計畫SoP 寫作諮詢、編修潤飾並提供專業建議
Major
申請 MS program in Computer Science at CMU、UCSD (University of California, San Diego)、Cornell
University、Columbia University、University
of California, Davis (UC Davis) 等校CS 碩士班學程 - Software Engineering/Computational Data Science (MCDS)/Natural
language processing (NLP)相關
Feedback
"The charge is reasonable and
thanks a lot for discussion with me. I think most of the editors won't discuss
with their clients. They just help other clients to "make up" their
SOP. I appreciate that Rob would refuse to edit my CV and SOP at the first time
I send my poor organized draft. I spend more time to think about how to
elaborate my motivation, and my SOP is not "made up" by someone else.
Thank you so much Rob!"
"Hi Rob!
I’ll go to CMU Information Networking
Institute this August.
Thank you so much for editing my SOP
and CV. I am so happy about this result.
...I’ll recommend your service to my
friends if they also need a professional editor."
Statement of Purpose
Submit a Statement of Purpose. Prepare a concise one or two page
essay that describes your primary areas of interest in research, your related
experiences, and your objective in pursuing a graduate degree at Carnegie
Mellon. Your essay should be specific in describing your interests and
motivations. When describing your research interests, you should explain why
you think they are important areas of study and why you are particularly
well-suited to pursuing them. You should describe any relevant education,
research, commercial, government, or teaching experience. If you are applying
to more than one program, you may (but are not required to) submit a separate
Statement of Purpose for each program. You must upload your Resume and
Statement of Purpose in either PDF, MS Word, or text format. Include your name
and User ID on the essay.
Notes for specific programs:
Human-Computer Interaction applicants: Indicate your intended area
of emphasis in the first paragraph of your Statement of Purpose. If appropriate
to your background, you may include a link to your portfolio. If you are unable
to provide a link, you may mail a CD of your portfolio to the Applications
Coordinator, at the address given above.
Software Engineering applicants: Concisely summarize your
background in software development, experience with particular parts of the
software life cycle, and how your industrial experience prepares you for
graduate-level academic work. Submit this information in the Supplemental
Information section under Experience (Research, Industry) in the online application.
Computation, Organizations and Society applicants: Indicate your
intended area in the first paragraph of your Statement of Purpose along with
the name of a possible advisor. For those with industrial or government
experience, please describe how this experience prepares you for graduate-level
academic work. Submit this information in the Supplemental Information section
under Experience (Research, Industry) in the online application. Applicants may
also submit a short prior publication related to their research interests.
Masters in Robotics System Development applicants: Please provide
some background information on your academic/industrial career to date, and
why/how that leads you to be interested in CMU's unique industry-oriented MRSD
degree-program. In order to aid in our candidate evaluation it would be helpful
for us to understand your career aspirations, how you see the mix of
technical/management education in the MRSD-program assisting you in achieving
these, and what you see yourself doing in 5 to 10 years after graduation.
Masters in Computer Science applicants: Please discuss your purpose in pursuing a
Masters degree in Computer Science. For
example, you might explain how advanced study in Computer Science fits into
your future career ambitions. There are
no right answers, and you do not need to have worked out your future plans in
detail. We just want to see that you
have thought your purpose through. If
your background is unusual, this is also the right place to explain it to us.
Source(s): http://www.cs.cmu.edu/masters-admissions
