留學文件精修潤飾 Personal Statement寫作指導、SoP修改、CV潤稿 (Computer Science)

已錄取： University of Michigan School of Information (Umich MSI)、Carnegie Mellon University (CMU)、University of Washington (UW) 含獎學金!!!

接案: 2014 Oct 26

使用方案: 

Academic Applications Proofreading and Editing Service /留學文件編修

Educational Counselling/留學諮詢、面試模擬

客戶: L. Lee

工作內容: 留學文件 (美國)、讀書計畫SoP 編修潤飾及提供專業建議

研究領域: Human-Computer Interaction (HCI), 人機互動，申請UMich School of Information、University of Washington等校

Feedback: "Hi Rob,

       I'm going to University of Michigan, school of information (UM MSI). I got several offers, including Carnegie Mellon: Master of educational technology, University of Washington, human centered design and engineering, UM health informatics (with scholarship) and UM MSI..."

特殊要求: 

Personal Statement

How have your background and life experiences, including cultural, geographical, financial, educational or other opportunities or challenges, motivated your decision to pursue a graduate degree at the University of Michigan?
Please see online application for further details.  The Personal Statement should be one to two (1-2) pages double-spaced.



Statement of Purpose

Please discuss the following questions based on your exploration of the UMSI website, as well as your own reflection on your academic abilities, experiences, and personal qualities. You are welcome to add comments from your readings, observations, and experience. Your essay should be four to six pages (4-6), double-spaced. At the School of Information, we highly value academic integrity. Please be sure that any essay content that is not your own original thoughts is properly attributed.

• What are the critical issues in the field of information?
• What are your aspirations in the field of information?
• What is your understanding of the School of Information?
• How will a UMSI education help you reach your aspirations?
• What would you contribute to the UMSI community and to the field as a whole

Source(s): https://www.si.umich.edu/academics/admissions/msi-application-requirements

Personal Statement

Your statement of qualifications, goals, and objectives is an essential part of the application. While there is no minimum length, the statement must not exceed two single-spaced pages (four double-spaced pages) and should address the following points:

• Reasons why you are interested in Human Centered Design & Engineering and if there is a particular area within it you would like to specialize in.
• How your previous education and experience relates to Human Centered Design & Engineering and any area of specialization.
• Career benefits that you expect to gain from the MS program.
• Additional information you would like the department to consider.

Source(s): http://www.hcde.washington.edu/ms/admissions#statement