#1413 留學文件 SoP、Letter of Motivation 編修潤飾 Proofreading&Editing (Material Science)

最新：已錄取德國Universität Freiburg、University of Kiel、Ulm University、Technische Universität Darmstadt!!!

接案: 2014 Mar 27

使用方案: 

Academic Applications Proofreading and Editing Service /留學文件編修

客戶: Joshua

工作內容: 留學文件 (德國) SoP、Letter of Motivation 動機信編修潤飾並提供專業建議、協助控制文長

研究領域: 材料科學/Material Science

申請 The international Master Program for Materials Science in Kiel, Germany/KielMAT international、Advanced Materials - Universität Ulm/University of Ulm等校

Feedback: 

"申請過程還蠻順利的，只是等待的時間比較煎熬。我後來被四間德國學校錄取，分別是Universität Freiburg, Universität KIel, Universität Ulm 和 Technische Universität Darmstadt。我後來選擇Technische Universität Darmstadt，因為該校提供了比較多元的課程和研究方向。"

"...Thank you very much for your work and advise on my SoP...  

I would let you know if I get accepted and maybe one year later I could tell you about the quality of education in Germany.

In the future, if my friends need an editor, I will definitely tell them that Sofi&Rob’s Assistance is their best choice!"

特殊要求: 協助控制頁數於1頁A4內、濃縮字數

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1. Statement of objectives
   
   • Please state in your own words why you choose to apply for the "Advanced Materials" program and how you hope to benefit from it.
   • Be specific about your personal interests in the field and your future plans.
   • Your statement of objectives may not be longer than one page (important). At least font size 11, spacing 1,15.
   • It has to carry your name and application number on top (font size 20). Sign it on the bottom
   • Choose a design that can be easily read.

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Source(s): http://www.uni-ulm.de/nawi/advmat/
http://www.tf.uni-kiel.de/matwis/kielmat/en