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Our client who
was applying to MS programs in Architecture gained admission to Columbia, University
of Pennsylvania, UCLA and Architectural Association School of Architecture for
fall semester 2013.
Admissions results
已錄取Columbia、UPenn、UCLA、AA !!!
Services rendered
Academic
Applications Proofreading and Editing Service /留學文件編修
留學文件 (美國、荷蘭)、讀書計畫SoP編修潤飾及提供專業建議
Major
申請Columbia、University of Pennsylvania、UCLA、AA (Architectural Association School of Architecture) 、MIT、TU Delft等校建築相關碩士學程、Graduate School of Architecture, Planning and Preservation
Architecture
Feedback
Dear Sofi &
Rob,
你們好，非常謝謝你們在之前那段時間的幫忙。
我目前拿到了四間學校的錄取，分別是Columbia, UPenn, UCLA和AA (Archtectural
Association)。另外MIT與UMich則是在waiting list內。
我很感謝你們的協助，讓我今年能夠有機會申請到我想要去的學校，如果沒有你們的協助，這一切都不會如此順利。目前我傾向於去Columbia，不知道你們有沒有什麼建議呢？
但無論如何，謝謝你們「非常有效率的協助」，如果以後面臨到類似需要潤稿的狀況，也希望還是能夠找你們幫忙。（對了，我已經向朋友推薦你們，或許很快她就會找你們幫忙潤稿了）
祝你們一切順利！
Thank you
"我很滿意你們的服務，品質與效率都是。"
Notes
"因為朋友對你們的服務有相當正面的評價，因此我希望能夠請你們幫忙潤稿。
我的狀況有些特殊，因為我的SOP已經是一篇經過editor潤飾過的文章了，而需要潤稿服務的其實是針對不同學校「客製化」的部分。
基本上是文章最後的兩個段落，每篇約略是180個字，總計會有7篇。"
PERSONAL
STATEMENT
Personal
statements should describe your background, past work in your intended field of
study, plans for graduate study and professional career, if applicable. If you
are presently in a graduate program at another university, please explain why
you wish to leave. If you have not yet come to a decision about your career, or
if your plans are tentative, please do not hesitate to say so.
source(s):
http://www.arch.columbia.edu/files/gsapp/imceshared/soc2106/MARCH-2014.pdf
