留學文件修改 讀書計畫SoP 編修潤飾 Proofreading&Editing (Computer Science)

Our client who was applying to Ph.D. programs in Computer Science gained admission to the University of California, Santa Barbara, Arizona State University, University of California, Irvine, Stony Brook University and the University of California, Santa Cruz for fall semester 2015. In addition, they earned a TAship at UCSB, a full scholarship from UCI, a TAship at ASU and a fellowship as well as TAship from SUNY Stony Brook.

Admissions results

已錄取UCSB (含獎學金)、ASU (含獎學金)、UCI、Stony Brook University (含獎學金)、UCSC !!!

Services rendered

Academic Applications Proofreading and Editing Service /留學文件編修

Educational Counselling/留學諮詢、面試模擬

留學文件 (美國) CV、讀書計畫SoP 寫作諮詢、編修潤飾並提供專業建議

Major  

申請Computer Science 博士班學程 Software Engineering/Mobile Devices/Network/Machine Learning 等領域

Feedback  

"I received the official admission today, came with 5 year financial support!"

"The professor I contacted is nice and the research is really a good match!

By now, I got admissions from ASU, UCI, UCSB, UCSC..."

留學文件潤稿 讀書計畫SoP修改 編修潤飾 Proofreading&Editing (Computer Science)

Our client who was applying to MS programs in Computer Science gained admission to Carnegie Mellon University, UC San Diego, Columbia, UC Davis and NYU for fall semester 2015. In addition, they earned a scholarship from Carnegie Mellon.

Admissions results

已錄取Carnegie Mellon University (CMU) 含獎學金、UCSD 、Columbia 、UC Davis 、NYU 等校!!!

Services rendered

Academic Applications Proofreading and Editing Service /留學文件編修

Educational Counselling/留學諮詢、面試模擬

留學文件 (美國) CV、讀書計畫SoP 寫作諮詢、編修潤飾並提供專業建議

Major  

申請 MS program in Computer Science at CMU、UCSD (University of California, San Diego)、Cornell University、Columbia University、University of California, Davis (UC Davis) 等校CS 碩士班學程 - Software Engineering/Computational Data Science (MCDS)/Natural language processing (NLP)相關

Feedback  

"The charge is reasonable and thanks a lot for discussion with me. I think most of the editors won't discuss with their clients. They just help other clients to "make up" their SOP. I appreciate that Rob would refuse to edit my CV and SOP at the first time I send my poor organized draft. I spend more time to think about how to elaborate my motivation, and my SOP is not "made up" by someone else. Thank you so much Rob!"

"Hi Rob!

I’ll go to CMU Information Networking Institute this August.

Thank you so much for editing my SOP and CV. I am so happy about this result.

...I’ll recommend your service to my friends if they also need a professional editor."

#1466 留學文件修改 讀書計畫SoP、個人陳述Personal Statement 編修潤飾 Proofreading&Editing (ECE/EECS)

最新：已錄取University of Michigan-Electrical and Computer Engineering!!!

接案: 2014 Sept. 29

使用方案: 

Academic Applications Proofreading and Editing Service /留學文件編修

Educational Counselling/留學諮詢、面試模擬

客戶: W.H. 

工作內容: 留學文件 (美國) CV、讀書計畫SoP、個人陳述Personal Statement 寫作諮詢、編修潤飾並提供專業建議

研究領域: 申請 EECS/ECE/EE at Umich、GaTech等校碩士班學程
feedback:　
" 非常感謝您與Rob的幫忙與鼓勵"

"Dear Rob, 
Personal statement is great! The revised version of it really present my characteristics, life experience and why I want to apply graduate school in engineering. The base draft of my statement of purpose is also favorable since it present more about my purpose of application rather than just describe stuffs from my CV."

特殊要求: 

Statement of Purpose+Personal Statement

留學文件精修潤飾 Personal Statement寫作指導、SoP修改、CV潤稿 (Computer Science)

已錄取： University of Michigan School of Information (Umich MSI)、Carnegie Mellon University (CMU)、University of Washington (UW) 含獎學金!!!

接案: 2014 Oct 26

使用方案: 

Academic Applications Proofreading and Editing Service /留學文件編修

Educational Counselling/留學諮詢、面試模擬

客戶: L. Lee

工作內容: 留學文件 (美國)、讀書計畫SoP 編修潤飾及提供專業建議

研究領域: Human-Computer Interaction (HCI), 人機互動，申請UMich School of Information、University of Washington等校

Feedback: "Hi Rob,

       I'm going to University of Michigan, school of information (UM MSI). I got several offers, including Carnegie Mellon: Master of educational technology, University of Washington, human centered design and engineering, UM health informatics (with scholarship) and UM MSI..."

特殊要求: 

Personal Statement

#1457 留學文件修改 讀書計畫SoP潤稿 編修潤飾 Proofreading&Editing (Computer Science)

最新：已錄取M.S. degree in Robotics (MRSD program) at Carnegie Mellon University (CMU)!!!

接案: 2014 Nov 27

使用方案: 

Academic Applications Proofreading and Editing Service /留學文件編修

Educational Counselling/留學諮詢、面試模擬

客戶: S.L

工作內容: 留學文件 (美國) CV、推薦函、讀書計畫SoP 寫作諮詢、編修潤飾並提供專業建議

研究領域: 申請 MS program in Computer Science at CMU 等校CS 碩士班學程

#1464 留學文件修改 SoP 讀書計畫、Letter of Motivation 動機信潤稿 編修潤飾 Proofreading&Editing (Information Technology)

最新：已錄取University Esslingen!!!

接案: 2014 Dec

使用方案: 

Academic Applications Proofreading and Editing Service /留學文件編修

客戶: Ju

工作內容: 留學文件 (德國、歐洲) CV、Letter of Motivation 動機信寫作諮詢、編修潤飾並提供專業建議

研究領域: 申請 Hochschule Esslingen (University Esslingen)、Universität Stuttgart (University of Stuttgart) 等校，申請Automotive Technology/Automotive Systems/Information Technology/human–machine interaction (HMI)/Computer Interface Technology/Embedded System Engineering 等領域碩士班學程

Feedback: "Your works look fantastic! Words can't tell how grateful I am."

特殊要求: Letter of Motivation

#1501 碩士預科留學申請 SoP 編修潤飾 Proofreading&Editing (Computer Science)

使用心得：

"謝謝你讓我的SOP看起來這麼精艷

第一次讀到的那剎那

真是慶幸還好有找上你們幫忙潤稿

(是朋友說一定要請人潤稿 我還有點不以為意呵呵)

你的認真跟用心 都表現在這SOP上

儘管這是你們的工作

我還是很謝謝你們讓我信心滿滿往夢想出發"

接案時間: 2015 Jun 9  

使用方案: 

Academic Applications Proofreading and Editing Service /留學文件編修

客戶: K.K 

工作內容: 留學文件 (美國) 讀書計畫SoP 編修潤飾並提供專業寫作建議

研究領域: 申請USC等校Computer Science領域Pre-Master's Program碩士預科學程

特殊要求:

急件、24 小時內完稿
Statement of Purpose: 

#1453 博士班留學申請 SoP、CV 編修潤飾 Proofreading&Editing (Electrical Engineering and Computer Science)

最新：已錄取University of Southern California (USC) (含全額獎助學金)、University of Texas at Austin (UT Austin) ！！！

接案: 2014 Oct 16

使用方案: 

Educational Counselling/留學諮詢、面試模擬

Academic Applications Proofreading and Editing Service /留學文件編修

客戶: A.J.

工作內容: 留學文件 (美國) CV、讀書計畫SoP 、個人陳述Personal Statement 寫作諮詢、編修潤飾並提供專業建議

研究領域: 申請 PhD program in Electrical Engineering and Computer Science at University of Southern California (USC)、University of Texas at Austin (UT Austin) 、UC Berkeley.等校電機工程與資訊科學 博士班學程

Feedback: "…The new edition of my CV after your services was more concise than the previous one which I am very satisfied…"

“我已經收到相關的郵件了,非常滿意”

特殊要求: 

Statement of Purpose and Resume

#1443 留學文件修改 讀書計畫SoP潤稿 CV編修潤飾 Proofreading&Editing (Computer Science)

最新：已錄取Carnegie Mellon University  (CMU)、UCSD、Brown University、EPFL (École polytechnique fédérale de Lausanne)!!!

接案: 2014 Nov 4

使用方案: 

Academic Applications Proofreading and Editing Service /留學文件編修

Educational Counselling/留學諮詢、面試模擬

客戶: A.H.

工作內容: 留學文件 (美國、歐洲) CV、讀書計畫SoP 寫作諮詢、編修潤飾並提供專業建議

研究領域: 申請 MS program in Computer Science at CMU、UCSD (University of California, San Diego)、Brown University、EPFL (École polytechnique fédérale de Lausanne) 等校碩士班學程

Feedback: "...I have got the admission of the program - SCS-RI Master in Computer Vision in Carnegie Mellon, which is my dream school. I've also been admitted in Brown MS CS, EPFL CS MS, and UCSD CSE MS. Just let you know and share the happiness. Also, I want to thank you again helping me refine my documents and get the admissions! "

特殊要求: 

Statement of Purpose

#1329 留學文件 讀書計畫SoP 編修潤飾 Proofreading&Editing (Computer Science)

最新：已錄取Cornell Information Science PhD、UW-Madison CS MS/PhD、CMU Robotics Institute MS、UCSD CSE MS

接案: 2013 Oct 10

使用方案: 

Academic Applications Proofreading and Editing Service /留學文件編修

Educational Counselling/留學諮詢、面試模擬

客戶: 台大電機系同學

工作內容: 留學文件 (美國) 含讀書計畫SoP 編修潤飾並提供專業建議

研究領域: Computer Science, HCI, Computer Vision

Feedback: "真的非常感謝你們的用心!"

"Dear Rob and Sofi,

I've got admission to Cornell Information Science PhD, UW-Madison CS MS/PhD, CMU Robotics Institute MS and UCSD CSE MS.

Finally, I decided to go to Cornell to study PhD.

I am really appreciated for your helping me edit my SOP and discussing about it with me..."

Application checklist:

#1339 留學文件 Personal History Statement 編修潤飾 Proofreading&Editing (Computer Science)

最新：已錄取Carnegie Mellon University (CMU)!!!

接案: Nov 8, 2013

使用方案: 

Academic Applications Proofreading and Editing Service /留學文件編修

客戶:  Wu 

工作內容: 留學文件 - 獎學金申請、SoP 讀書計畫、推薦信編修潤飾並提供專業建議

研究領域: 申請Electrical Engineering & Computer Sciences, EECS at UC Berkeley、Electrical and Computer Engineering at Carnegie Mellon 等校

資訊科學, 信息科学技术領域

Feedback: "感謝您們正在幫我修改 personal statement 

...合作很順利，Rob老師給的建議都很棒也很有方向讓身為非英語母語者也可以慢慢熟悉英文寫作"

"Hi Sofi and Rob,

Thanks for your help, I got the admission from several schools!!!

Since I was already admitted to ECE program at Carnegie Mellon Univ., and it's one of my dream school in CS field..."

Prepare your required materials:

#1330 留學文件 推薦信 編修潤飾 Proofreading&Editing (Computer Science)

使用心得：

"<<推薦信>>

我的推薦人都請我自己先打草稿 一開始我就開始google+剪貼 完成了三封吹噓自己的東西 然後就寄給老師看了，不知道哪來的膽子XDD 後來，就找了Sofi & Rob (http://sofi1rob.blogspot.tw/) 他人超好的阿，直來直往很對我胃口，雖然應該會傷到不少人的心靈XD 幫我模擬成三個不同的口氣，教授看了都說讚（什麼廣告巫術!） 不過翻譯這件事情我覺得見仁見智，在此留學版之前也討論過。" 

(https://www.ptt.cc/bbs/studyabroad/M.1395982942.A.ADC.html) 台大批踢踢 作者：dsvu

已錄取：University of Southern California (USC)、Carnegie Mellon University (CMU)、 University of North Carolina at Chapel Hill、Columbia University!!!

接案: Oct 14, 2013

使用方案: 

Academic Applications Proofreading and Editing Service /留學文件編修

客戶:  Wu 

工作內容: 留學文件 - 推薦信編修潤飾並提供專業建議

研究領域:  Computer Science, 資訊科學 

Feedback: "太感謝你們的幫忙了、、、感謝Rob老師的指點"

"很感謝rob老師幫我很多撰寫 LOR、PS 的方向，很慶幸申請的路上有您的幫助！！"

特殊要求: "我需要的不只是純翻譯或是潤飾 

而是希望的是對於內容可以給一些建議

特別是來自對申請留學有經驗的譯者"

#1411 留學文件修改 推薦信潤稿 LoR 編修潤飾 Proofreading&Editing (Quantitative Finance)

錄取 MS Analytics - Georgia Institute of Technology!!!
接案: 2014 Mar 15

使用方案: 

Educational Counselling/留學諮詢、面試模擬

Academic Applications Proofreading and Editing Service /留學文件編修

客戶:  Fu

工作內容: 留學文件 (美國)、推薦信 編修潤飾Proofreading&Editing及提供專業建議

研究領域: Data Science/数据科学, Quantitative Finance/計量財務

Masters in Data Science, Columbia University 

Feedback: "Thank you also for the letter you sent me last time with the suggestion, that is exactly what I am looking for. I submit the one you edit for me and will let you know the result asap. "

#1410 留學文件 SoP、Letter of Motivation 編修潤飾 Proofreading&Editing (Computer Science)

接案: 2014 Feb 26

費時: 預約

客戶: Jessica

工作內容: 留學文件 (美國、德國) SoP、Letter of Motivation 動機信編修潤飾並提供專業建議、協助控制文長

研究領域: 電腦科學/計算機科學/資訊工程/Computer Science

申請 UNC Computer Science (The University of North Carolina at Chapel Hill)、以及 Computer Science in Kaiserslautern - Universität Kaiserslautern、

Master Program INFOTECH | University of Stuttgart  等校

Feedback: "The documents are great, thanks you!!"

"...thanks a lot!! You are a great editor. :D

I will let you know which school will be my choice in the end."

特殊要求: 若干文件需British English 英式英語編修、協助控制頁數於1頁A4內

Source(s): http://www.informatik.uni-stuttgart.de/studierende/studiengaenge/computer-science.html

#1346 讀書計畫 SoP 編修潤飾 Proofreading&Editing (IT)

已錄取：UCLA!!!

接案: Nov 21, 2013 

使用方案: 

Academic Applications Proofreading and Editing Service /留學文件編修

客戶: 台灣大學電子所同學

工作內容: 留學文件 (美國) 含讀書計畫SoP 編修潤飾並提供專業建議

研究領域:  University of California, Los Angeles/UCLA Computer Science

Feedback: "The refined document is satisfactory, and I really appreciate your help."

"...the content looks good to me and thanks for your professional editing."

CV1356 留學文件 客製化SoP 編修潤飾 Proofreading&Editing (Computer Science)

最新：已錄取Cornell Information Science PhD、UW-Madison CS MS/PhD、CMU Robotics Institute MS、UCSD CSE MS
接案: 2013 Dec 7

費時: 預約/1小時

客戶: 台大電機系同學

工作內容: 留學文件 (美國) 含讀書計畫SoP 編修潤飾並提供專業建議

研究領域: Computer Science, HCI, Computer Vision, PhD in Information Science at Cornell
特殊要求: "有針對其他學校做SOP的客制化，想請你們幫我proofread這份SOP" 
Feedback: "謝謝你們快速的服務，讓我SOP的用字變的很精確也流暢不少!..."
"Dear Rob and Sofi,

I've got admission to Cornell Information Science PhD, UW-Madison CS MS/PhD, CMU Robotics Institute MS and UCSD CSE MS.

Finally, I decided to go to Cornell to study PhD.

I am really appreciated for your helping me edit my SOP and discussing about it with me..."

Statement of Purpose

A successful statement of purpose will address the following topics:

CV1355 Statement of Purpose 讀書計畫、個人陳述 Proofreading&Editing 編修潤飾 (HCI)

接案: 2013 Dec 3

費時: 預約 

客戶: 國立臺灣大學工商管理學系同學, Ruby

工作內容: 留學文件 (美國)、讀書計畫SoP 編修潤飾並提供專業建議

研究領域: Master's Program at the University of Washington (UW) - Human Centered Design & Engineering (HCDE) 
Feedback: "Thanks so much for working this late for the SOP!" "Thanks for the explanation."

Statement of Qualifications, Goals, and Career Objectives

The statement of qualifications, goals, and objectives is an important part of the application portfolio. The Admissions Committee considers content and format when evaluating the statement, which should not exceed two pages.

CV1354 SoP 讀書計畫、LoR 推薦函 編修潤飾 Proofreading&Editing (Computer Science)

接案: 2013 Nov 25

費時: 預約

客戶: 成功大學電機所同學

工作內容: 留學文件 (美國) 含讀書計畫SoP 編修潤飾並提供專業建議

研究領域: School of Computer Science - Carnegie Mellon University

Feedback: "Thanks for your advise again! ( I really think I should invite you to Tainan and treat you a big meal!)"

Application Instructions

Statement of Purpose

Submit a Statement of Purpose. Prepare a concise one or two page essay that describes your primary areas of interest in research, your related experiences, and your objective in pursuing a graduate degree at Carnegie Mellon.