留學文件潤稿 讀書計畫SoP修改 編修潤飾 Proofreading&Editing (Computer Science)

Our client who was applying to MS programs in Computer Science gained admission to Carnegie Mellon University, UC San Diego, Columbia, UC Davis and NYU for fall semester 2015. In addition, they earned a scholarship from Carnegie Mellon.

Admissions results

已錄取Carnegie Mellon University (CMU) 含獎學金、UCSD 、Columbia 、UC Davis 、NYU 等校!!!

Services rendered

Academic Applications Proofreading and Editing Service /留學文件編修

Educational Counselling/留學諮詢、面試模擬

留學文件 (美國) CV、讀書計畫SoP 寫作諮詢、編修潤飾並提供專業建議

Major  

申請 MS program in Computer Science at CMU、UCSD (University of California, San Diego)、Cornell University、Columbia University、University of California, Davis (UC Davis) 等校CS 碩士班學程 - Software Engineering/Computational Data Science (MCDS)/Natural language processing (NLP)相關

Feedback  

"The charge is reasonable and thanks a lot for discussion with me. I think most of the editors won't discuss with their clients. They just help other clients to "make up" their SOP. I appreciate that Rob would refuse to edit my CV and SOP at the first time I send my poor organized draft. I spend more time to think about how to elaborate my motivation, and my SOP is not "made up" by someone else. Thank you so much Rob!"

"Hi Rob!

I’ll go to CMU Information Networking Institute this August.

Thank you so much for editing my SOP and CV. I am so happy about this result.

...I’ll recommend your service to my friends if they also need a professional editor."

留學文件精修潤飾 Personal Statement寫作指導、SoP修改、CV潤稿 (Computer Science)

已錄取： University of Michigan School of Information (Umich MSI)、Carnegie Mellon University (CMU)、University of Washington (UW) 含獎學金!!!

接案: 2014 Oct 26

使用方案: 

Academic Applications Proofreading and Editing Service /留學文件編修

Educational Counselling/留學諮詢、面試模擬

客戶: L. Lee

工作內容: 留學文件 (美國)、讀書計畫SoP 編修潤飾及提供專業建議

研究領域: Human-Computer Interaction (HCI), 人機互動，申請UMich School of Information、University of Washington等校

Feedback: "Hi Rob,

       I'm going to University of Michigan, school of information (UM MSI). I got several offers, including Carnegie Mellon: Master of educational technology, University of Washington, human centered design and engineering, UM health informatics (with scholarship) and UM MSI..."

特殊要求: 

Personal Statement

#1457 留學文件修改 讀書計畫SoP潤稿 編修潤飾 Proofreading&Editing (Computer Science)

最新：已錄取M.S. degree in Robotics (MRSD program) at Carnegie Mellon University (CMU)!!!

接案: 2014 Nov 27

使用方案: 

Academic Applications Proofreading and Editing Service /留學文件編修

Educational Counselling/留學諮詢、面試模擬

客戶: S.L

工作內容: 留學文件 (美國) CV、推薦函、讀書計畫SoP 寫作諮詢、編修潤飾並提供專業建議

研究領域: 申請 MS program in Computer Science at CMU 等校CS 碩士班學程

#1446 留學文件 讀書計畫SoP 編修潤飾 Proofreading&Editing (Information Management)

最新：已錄取Carnegie Mellon University 、University of Michigan!!!

接案: 2014 Dec 11

使用方案: 

Academic Applications Proofreading and Editing Service /留學文件編修

Academic Essay Writing/學術寫作指導

客戶: M.C

工作內容: 留學文件 (美國) 推薦信、讀書計畫SoP 、Personal Statement 寫作諮詢、並提供專業建議

研究領域: 申請Carnegie Mellon University 、University of Michigan、Texas A&M- Master of Science in Information program 等校碩士資訊/資管學程

Feedback: "Hi Rob,
I'm really happy to share this good news with you. I got the offers from both CMU MISM Global Track and University of Michigan SI!!!
I would not get those without your help! thanks a lots :)"
特殊要求:  

Statement of Purpose

#1443 留學文件修改 讀書計畫SoP潤稿 CV編修潤飾 Proofreading&Editing (Computer Science)

最新：已錄取Carnegie Mellon University  (CMU)、UCSD、Brown University、EPFL (École polytechnique fédérale de Lausanne)!!!

接案: 2014 Nov 4

使用方案: 

Academic Applications Proofreading and Editing Service /留學文件編修

Educational Counselling/留學諮詢、面試模擬

客戶: A.H.

工作內容: 留學文件 (美國、歐洲) CV、讀書計畫SoP 寫作諮詢、編修潤飾並提供專業建議

研究領域: 申請 MS program in Computer Science at CMU、UCSD (University of California, San Diego)、Brown University、EPFL (École polytechnique fédérale de Lausanne) 等校碩士班學程

Feedback: "...I have got the admission of the program - SCS-RI Master in Computer Vision in Carnegie Mellon, which is my dream school. I've also been admitted in Brown MS CS, EPFL CS MS, and UCSD CSE MS. Just let you know and share the happiness. Also, I want to thank you again helping me refine my documents and get the admissions! "

特殊要求: 

Statement of Purpose

#1329 留學文件 讀書計畫SoP 編修潤飾 Proofreading&Editing (Computer Science)

最新：已錄取Cornell Information Science PhD、UW-Madison CS MS/PhD、CMU Robotics Institute MS、UCSD CSE MS

接案: 2013 Oct 10

使用方案: 

Academic Applications Proofreading and Editing Service /留學文件編修

Educational Counselling/留學諮詢、面試模擬

客戶: 台大電機系同學

工作內容: 留學文件 (美國) 含讀書計畫SoP 編修潤飾並提供專業建議

研究領域: Computer Science, HCI, Computer Vision

Feedback: "真的非常感謝你們的用心!"

"Dear Rob and Sofi,

I've got admission to Cornell Information Science PhD, UW-Madison CS MS/PhD, CMU Robotics Institute MS and UCSD CSE MS.

Finally, I decided to go to Cornell to study PhD.

I am really appreciated for your helping me edit my SOP and discussing about it with me..."

Application checklist:

#1339 留學文件 Personal History Statement 編修潤飾 Proofreading&Editing (Computer Science)

最新：已錄取Carnegie Mellon University (CMU)!!!

接案: Nov 8, 2013

使用方案: 

Academic Applications Proofreading and Editing Service /留學文件編修

客戶:  Wu 

工作內容: 留學文件 - 獎學金申請、SoP 讀書計畫、推薦信編修潤飾並提供專業建議

研究領域: 申請Electrical Engineering & Computer Sciences, EECS at UC Berkeley、Electrical and Computer Engineering at Carnegie Mellon 等校

資訊科學, 信息科学技术領域

Feedback: "感謝您們正在幫我修改 personal statement 

...合作很順利，Rob老師給的建議都很棒也很有方向讓身為非英語母語者也可以慢慢熟悉英文寫作"

"Hi Sofi and Rob,

Thanks for your help, I got the admission from several schools!!!

Since I was already admitted to ECE program at Carnegie Mellon Univ., and it's one of my dream school in CS field..."

Prepare your required materials:

#1330 留學文件 推薦信 編修潤飾 Proofreading&Editing (Computer Science)

使用心得：

"<<推薦信>>

我的推薦人都請我自己先打草稿 一開始我就開始google+剪貼 完成了三封吹噓自己的東西 然後就寄給老師看了，不知道哪來的膽子XDD 後來，就找了Sofi & Rob (http://sofi1rob.blogspot.tw/) 他人超好的阿，直來直往很對我胃口，雖然應該會傷到不少人的心靈XD 幫我模擬成三個不同的口氣，教授看了都說讚（什麼廣告巫術!） 不過翻譯這件事情我覺得見仁見智，在此留學版之前也討論過。" 

(https://www.ptt.cc/bbs/studyabroad/M.1395982942.A.ADC.html) 台大批踢踢 作者：dsvu

已錄取：University of Southern California (USC)、Carnegie Mellon University (CMU)、 University of North Carolina at Chapel Hill、Columbia University!!!

接案: Oct 14, 2013

使用方案: 

Academic Applications Proofreading and Editing Service /留學文件編修

客戶:  Wu 

工作內容: 留學文件 - 推薦信編修潤飾並提供專業建議

研究領域:  Computer Science, 資訊科學 

Feedback: "太感謝你們的幫忙了、、、感謝Rob老師的指點"

"很感謝rob老師幫我很多撰寫 LOR、PS 的方向，很慶幸申請的路上有您的幫助！！"

特殊要求: "我需要的不只是純翻譯或是潤飾 

而是希望的是對於內容可以給一些建議

特別是來自對申請留學有經驗的譯者"

#1405 留學文件 Statement of Purpose 編修潤飾 Proofreading&Editing (Bioinformatics)

最新：已錄取Carnegie Mellon University、Georgia Institute of Technology!!!

接案: Jan 20, 2014

使用方案: 

Academic Applications Proofreading and Editing Service /留學文件編修

Educational Counselling/留學諮詢、面試模擬

客戶:  Cheng

工作內容: 留學文件 (美國) 含讀書計畫SoP 編修潤飾並提供專業建議

研究領域: M.S. in Bioinformatics/生物資訊/生物信息学，申請 Georgia Institute of Technology (Georgia Tech) 、Johns Hopkins University (JHU)、University of Pittsburgh等校 

Feedback: 

"Dear Rob,

I got the admission from Carnegie Mellon University and Georgia Institute of Technology. Just share the good news with you and thank you for your help. :)"

"I feel the SoP is more fluent now. Thanks for your help these days. After contacting with you, I am more confident about myself. If I get good news, I will tell you soon. I really like your service and would like to let more Taiwanese know your company. I would like to write a letter of recommendation on BBS." 

"You always do your best to help your clients. I appreciate your attitude! ...The opening paragraph is great. I feel that I can never write something like that. "

"Thank you for your addition to the end. I think it makes my background integrate with my intention even better... After you editing, my SoP is totally different now. I appreciate you help so much."

特殊要求:  

Personal Statement -  Please indicate the basis of your interest in graduate study. The Personal Statement is required to address four items: 

#1345 讀書計畫 SoP 編修潤飾 Proofreading&Editing (Linguistics)

最新：已錄取Carnegie Mellon University (含獎學金)!!!

接案: Nov 20, 2013 

使用方案: 

Academic Applications Proofreading and Editing Service /留學文件編修

Educational Counselling/留學諮詢、面試模擬

客戶: Lin 

工作內容: 留學文件 (英國、美國) 含讀書計畫SoP 編修潤飾並提供專業建議

研究領域:  Linguistics,語言學/ 申請 Cambridge、 Georgetown University、University of Massachusetts Boston、University of Hawaii at Manoa、M.A. in Rhetoric-Department of English - Carnegie Mellon University 等校

Feedback:  

"I got the offer from Carnegie Mellon, MA in Rhetoric!

This is my first choice all along, plus they offer me partial scholarship and maybe RAship or TAship. So I am pretty sure I am going! Thank you so much for your help along the dark moments in my life, aka the application process : )"

"Thank you so much for everything! I'll let you know how the applications go : P Merry Christmas!" 

"Thank you for helping my friend too! She said you are amazingly helpful! (I seconded!)"

#1357 Statement of Purpose 讀書計畫 Proofreading&Editing 編修潤飾 (Information Engineering)

錄取：Carnegie Mellon University MS Computer Software Engineering
接案: 2013 Dec 12

使用方案: 

Academic Applications Proofreading and Editing Service /留學文件編修

客戶: Mr Tsai

工作內容: 留學文件 (美國) Personal Statement 編修潤飾並提供專業建議

研究領域: 資工, 資訊工程, 信息工程, Information Engineering (IE) 
特殊要求: "Professional Experience 英文潤稿, 文意不改, 只修用辭文法, 順手讓文字精鍊當然更好"
Feedback: "Fantastic !!.  This version is perfect...Thanks again for the overnight work.  I wish I can have a chance to cooperate with  you in the future. "