留學UK申請錄取心得：Business Analytics、行銷碩士 - SoP寫作諮詢、英文讀書計畫修改 Personal Statement 編修潤飾

[錄取] 含獎學金£5000英鎊、獎學金£6500英鎊各一, Surrey Business Analytics MSc /Loughborough University Business Analytics Consulting MSc/Leeds Consumer Analytics and Marketing Strategy MSc/Cardiff Social Science Research Methods (Business and Management Studies: Marketing and Strategy) (MSc/PgDip)/Aston University Business Analytics MSc/Stirling Data Science for Business MSc/University of Southampton Business School Marketing Analytics MSc

Our client who was applying to MS programs in Data Science, Business Analytics and Marketing gained admission to Surrey, Loughborough, Leeds, Cardiff, Aston, Stirling and University of Southampton Business School for fall semester 2016. In addition, our client was honored with a £6,500 and a £ 5,000 scholarship from two respective schools.

Admissions results

已錄取Surrey (索立大學), Loughborough (羅浮堡大學), Leeds (里茲大學), Cardiff (卡地夫大學), Aston (阿斯頓大學), Stirling (史德林大學) and University of Southampton Business School (南安普敦大學)等校!!!

Services rendered

Academic Applications Proofreading and Editing Service /留學文件編修

Educational Counselling/留學諮詢、面試模擬

留學文件 (英國) CV、Personal Statement、讀書計畫SoP 寫作諮詢、英式英文編修潤飾並提供專業建議

Major  

申請Surrey (索立大學), Loughborough (羅浮堡大學), Leeds (里茲大學), Cardiff (卡地夫大學), Aston (阿斯頓大學), Stirling (史德林大學) and University of Southampton Business School (南安普敦大學)、Lancaster等校Data Science/數據科學、Business Analytics/商業分析、Marketing/行銷等領域碩士學程

Feedback  

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"thank you so much for your help"
"I really appreciate your edit service to help me get the good result."

Notes

How to write a UCAS personal statement 

• Your UCAS personal statement can only be 4,000 characters or 47 lines of text long (including spaces and blank lines), so it needs to be clear and concise while showcasing your relevant achievements and talents 
• Make sure you have a good structure and use paragraphs 
• Spell check, proofread and show your statement to teachers and parents to ensure there are no mistakes 
• Don’t try to be funny or controversial 
• While personal statement examples are available online, don’t plagiarise - UCAS has advanced software to detect this

source(s): http://www.surrey.ac.uk/features/top-tips-writing-personal-statement

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