留學申請錄取心得:耶魯公衛 (Public Health) - 留學文件修改 英文讀書計畫 SoP寫作建議


[錄取] 公衛碩士 - 耶魯、柏克萊、約翰霍普金斯、U Mich 、Boston University, Emory University MPH

Our client who was applying to Master of Public Health (M.P.H.) programs gained admission to Yale University, Johns Hopkins University, UC Berkeley, University of Michigan, Boston University, and Emory University for fall semester 2016

Admissions results
已錄取Yale University, Johns Hopkins University, UC Berkeley, University of Michigan, Boston University, Emory University 
耶魯公衛碩士、柏克萊、約翰霍普金斯等系所全數錄取!!! 狂賀!!!

Services rendered
Academic Applications Proofreading and Editing Service /留學文件編修
Educational Consultation/留學諮詢
Academic Essay Writing Tutorial/學術寫作指導
留學文件 (美國) CV、讀書計畫SoP Personal Statement、獎助學金申請寫作諮詢、編修潤飾並提供專業建議
Major  
申請MPH學位,Yale School of Public Health - Yale University、Johns Hopkins Bloomberg School of Public Health、UC Berkeley School of Public Health、University of Michigan School of Public Health等校公共衛生、流行病學碩士班學程
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Notes
What is the word limit for the personal statement and what should it include?
The personal statement is one of the most important components of your application. It is your opportunity to make the case for why we should admit you. Tell us your public health story, highlighting the formative experiences you have had in public health, what these experiences have taught you and how they are informing your decision to pursue your M.P.H. studies at Yale. Your area of interest or the public health question you wish to explore should be clear. We also would like to know your plans for how you hope to use your degree. And, of course, anything you can tell us about what you bring to the classroom is also helpful. We do not have a word limit.

Source: https://publichealth.yale.edu/admissions/how/


You will need to upload both your Statement of Purpose and Personal History Statement to both the SOPHAS application and the UC Berkeley application. Both of the statements you submit to SOPHAS must be identical to what you submit to the UC Berkeley application. Both statements must adhere to the word/character limits of the SOPHAS application. Although the UC Berkeley application allows for a larger file upload, you must follow the SOPHAS limitations.

DO NOT upload your essays to only one application system and indicate that we need to see the other application to find your essay. This will be considered incomplete.
Word Limits
Statement of Purpose - 9999 characters (including letters, spaces, and punctuations)
Personal History Statement - 5000 characters (including letters, spaces, and punctuations)
General Guidelines
Statement of Purpose - Your Statement of Purpose should explain why your background has prepared you for graduate training in public health. It is intended to give you the opportunity to submit a tailored narrative which will describe your education, experience and professional career objectives. Your statement of purpose should describe your: reasons for interest in public health, reasons for interest in program of study and/or concentration, career goals, why you need a degree in your specific program, why you are pursuing this degree now, and why at UC Berkeley. If you are applying to a doctoral program, include your proposed research topics. Please be sure to check your program’s page for more information as some programs have specific prompts they like you to follow. If a prompt is not listed, please follow the guidelines described above. For more information, please see the Statement of Purpose Guide developed by our Graduate Recruitment and Diversity (GRADS) team.
Personal History Statement - Your Personal History Statement gives you an opportunity to add some individuality and depth to the information provided in your Statement of Purpose. Your Personal History Statement can include information about who you are as a person, your family background, cultural background, socioeconomic status, educational disadvantages, and experiences growing up. It is intended to give you the opportunity to provide a narrative about your diverse lived-experiences. For more information, please see the Personal History Statement Guide  on the UC Berkeley Graduate Division website.
Be sure to double-check if the degree program you are applying to has specific guidelines for either of these statements. If so, make sure you clearly address any of those program-specific guidelines.

Source: http://sph.berkeley.edu/admissions/requirements
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