#1427 留學文件 Letter of Motivation 編修潤飾 Proofreading&Editing (MBA)

接案: 2014 Oct 17

使用方案: 

Academic Applications Proofreading and Editing Service /留學文件編修

客戶: Yan
工作內容: 留學文件 (德國) Letter of Motivation 動機信編修潤飾並提供專業建議、協助控制文長
研究領域: MBA 申請 EBS Business School 等校
Feedback: 
"Thank you for the edit.

I am pleased about the revision,the paragraphs of the letter are more clear and the sentences are more concise now.It is really beyond my expectation. "

Letter of motivation and CV

"In addition to a current CV, applicants should submit a letter of motivation of approximately two pages in length outlining in detail the reasons for applying for the respective Master's programme."
Source(s): 
https://www.ebs.edu/en/business-school/study-programmes/full-time-master/application/requirements.html

其他要求: 
"動機信內容要著重我的工作經歷、為甚麼選德國學校。我已開始
寫些段落,需要你們幫忙: 1.濃縮內容 2.用字修飾3. 段落架構整合 "