#1405 留學文件 Statement of Purpose 編修潤飾 Proofreading&Editing (Bioinformatics)

最新：已錄取Carnegie Mellon University、Georgia Institute of Technology!!!

接案: Jan 20, 2014

使用方案: 

Academic Applications Proofreading and Editing Service /留學文件編修

Educational Counselling/留學諮詢、面試模擬

客戶:  Cheng

工作內容: 留學文件 (美國) 含讀書計畫SoP 編修潤飾並提供專業建議

研究領域: M.S. in Bioinformatics/生物資訊/生物信息学，申請 Georgia Institute of Technology (Georgia Tech) 、Johns Hopkins University (JHU)、University of Pittsburgh等校 

Feedback: 

"Dear Rob,

I got the admission from Carnegie Mellon University and Georgia Institute of Technology. Just share the good news with you and thank you for your help. :)"

"I feel the SoP is more fluent now. Thanks for your help these days. After contacting with you, I am more confident about myself. If I get good news, I will tell you soon. I really like your service and would like to let more Taiwanese know your company. I would like to write a letter of recommendation on BBS." 

"You always do your best to help your clients. I appreciate your attitude! ...The opening paragraph is great. I feel that I can never write something like that. "

"Thank you for your addition to the end. I think it makes my background integrate with my intention even better... After you editing, my SoP is totally different now. I appreciate you help so much."

特殊要求:  

Personal Statement -  Please indicate the basis of your interest in graduate study. The Personal Statement is required to address four items: 

(a)  A brief summary of your background in all relevant fields, to include at least medicine and computer science. Although it is not necessary that an applicant have backgrounds in medicine or computer science, it helps the admissions committee to determine any prerequisites that you might be required to take before or shortly thereafter being accepted into the program.  It is highly encouraged that applicants have some computer programming knowledge in C, C++ and/or JAVA language before entering the program.  Describe your research experiences and any hypotheses and results that were generated in your experimental work. Provide dates, research advisors, and project titles.

(b)  A statement of your educational goals and how they would be advanced through participation in the training program.

(c)  A statement of your career objectives, both short and long term. When preparing the short-term portion of your statement, please be specific regarding any projects you may have in mind that could contribute to the success of your biomedical informatics training.

(d) A statement of your writing ability.  Indicate how well you perceive your writing ability to be at this time.  State how you will improve on your current writing ability to meet the requirements of rigorous research-based technical papers.

Source(s): http://www.dbmi.pitt.edu/content/apply-program